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Falling Fluttershy And Discord

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Trying out a full colour drawing now. Let me know what you like and/or how I can improve down in the comments. Thanks!
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alright, here my critique goes:
the good parts- i love how smooth the lines and coloring is, keeping close to the show's coloring. i also like the perspective blur of the clouds in the background, shoing the fact the two are falling.

where improvement is needed- fluttershy looks almost too relaxed, where as she should be at least a little more panicked. her mane seems a bit too short, along with her tail. her wings seem a bit too large.

ok, i'm free now! :iconminglalalaplz: